Searching
I’m searching for an enlightened sense of intuition
The kind I don’t have to mention
The inner voice that originates from above
I mean coming from a supreme love
I know my journey up Mystic Mountain
Is leading me to the everlasting fountain
Of love, joy, peace, long suffering, kindness
Goodness, faithfulness, gentleness
Self-control
Fruits of the Spirit to feed my soul
So I just gotta hold — on
Strong and steadfast
Quieting my thoughts
Listening for the everlast–
Ting peace
The love that never cease
The place I find when I finally release
All my doubts, frustrations and fear
I know if I listen close I can hear
It in the distance
Pass the white noise of this existence
I just must remain consistent
True to myself and my beliefs
Then the summit I will have reached
Mystic Mountain 
perseverance is the key to success marlee- great write and tq for coming by..
True enough, when we cling to our beliefs, we also cling to ourself. Thanks a lot for this great inspiration. 🙂
Yes, gotta hold on to that hope inside..never let it die.
Your poem sounded spiritual to me. It’s like finding a purpose in life, or searching for inner peace, or the serenity that can be found by resting in God’s love. 🙂 The words you chose for the poem are beautiful. Keep it up 🙂
Wonderful, Marlee. I love the line “pass the white noise of this existence”. There is a lot of “white noise” out there that can threaten to pull us off our paths. I can feel your heart’s desire in this one–beautiful.
keep searching,
you will be there.
A+
Your sense of making a journey comes across really strongly here. I felt I was with you all the way!
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You’ve captured the true essence of the law, as I understand it!
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I love this!!! I mean that’s all I got! LOL very touching I could hear it in your voice.
Wonderfully written 😛 Hope is in your hand for sure ^^
What we all seek. very nicely expressed.
This reads like a prayer…enjoyable!
happy potluck!
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