This piece was originally inspired by a Monday Poet’s Potluck on 7 Deadly Sins, but I didn’t finish it until now. Just in time for Thursday Poets Rally Week 34!
I hope you enjoy it!
Urge of the Flesh
The urges of the flesh sneak up on me I find myself fighting them almost instantly Yet I know how they got in my mind Cuz the 7 deadly sins ain’t nothing but a thought And like the words from my mouth They pour on and on Leading you down paths that you probably shouldn’t be on You could be like me Sitting watching Oprah’s favorite things and Instead of feeling joy for their benefit I’m fighting to get envy off my back I know you laugh but it’s as simple as that And not only do I want the gifts they were given Now I want to BE Oprah Lusting after her wealth and notability Wishing I had a set and a crew Then I could walk around telling folks what to do And if I was Oprah, whew! I’d do it bigger than she does Gold plated cars and custom leather interior A home in every country and two in Liberia But here I go again Fighting that deadly sin Giving over to greed Instead of taking what I need Sitting on the couch Probably in a slouch Fighting the urge to be a sloth Sipping on veggie broth Wondering what else is in the kitchen Thinking about a munchies mission And as I think of it I feed my pride Thinking a midnight run to the fridge is nothing to hide It’s not like I’m eating buckets of chicken in the bed Or even that I’m over fed Just a snack here A bite there Beyond what I need to survive Even way more than I need to thrive Now gluttony has worked it’s way into my life Funny how I can see these things within my daily life Fighting the urge of the flesh Is far from fresh It truly can make your life a mess From the time you wake up to the time you sleep You are suspended just above the heap Of suffers and victims Not able to survive the FIGHT And all you can do is put your wrath to action Fight on to victory Even when the struggle is small Fight on to victory Even when it seems to take all you have Fight on to victory
Very interesting neurotic nature to this..
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a fun read,
well said.
thanks for sharing it with poets rally.
😉
Very beautiful imagination..
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Very well written…
Thank you for sharing 🙂
hmm.. urge of flesh swivels round your battle of conscience..
interesting write..
cheers!!
Regards~ Sayandeep
Sins are deadly, have universal presence
Let our sins be crushed by common sense.
Well said.
A great write! Well crafted!
very well written, creative take 🙂 even if u missed potluck, u didnt miss the rally 😀 good.
Here is my Rally Poem
I loved the poem! It made me thinkg and laugh as well. Great job..
SHAKESPHERE! 😀 other than taht this has definitely got a different feel to it, its amazing….:)
very fun, true and made me laugh!
I really like the format of this one. Nice work
Haha!!…Temptation mate!!…Control urself.. Nice poem ftw!!
A wonderful poem. I have to admit, I chuckled about being Oprah..)
Wysteria
Love the Envy. I get it.
“…Fight on to victory…” with help, we have won; over and over again.
I’m listening for more from you.
Very funny 🙂
great piece 🙂
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An URGE… urges of the flesh some we battle some we let be it truly is our mind that sets us free.
I suppose we could all be Oprah if we had her work ethic, ethos and energy…
Thanks for your visit to http://shawnbird.com/2010/12/03/night-warmth/ I am glad it reminded you to appreciate what you have in your relationship!
Shawn
PS- I like the peaceful misty photo header on your site.
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I love Dr. Goyal. He’s right.
Wonderful poem and they birth themselves in their own good time. Just right.
Victory is ours … Poem on …