Acceptance (Haiku)
The Perfect Poet
I am so glad to show it
Let the whole world know
I humbly accept and I nominate Ms. Peaches.
Thank you Jingle!
Conflict
The I and me The I and we Basicaly We have to live Seperately Due to your mentality You see… We are viewed so differently But our similarities Are plain to see All made from one All made in one All decendents of the Holy One But along the way You got lead astray And then lead others In the same corrupt way You wanna be my EQUAL and OPPOSITE FORCE Distracting me from my course My objectives, My goals You want me to believe what I’m told Chasing after that fool’s gold Please I got my hands on Behold And I see the debt that you hold You’re indentured and enslaved Just like me But you don’t see The way that will set you free That’s why we have CONFLICT Conflict of interest Conflict of demands Conflict of values A conflict to understand Conflict It beats on my brain Slowly driving me insane What a shame So connected to their world This physical twirl Hardly winning Wishing for a new beginning This unbalance surronds everything around I try to ignore it But I can damn near hear the sound Of this system crumbling and fading And I stand here waiting For that day The conflict will fade away
Mystic Mountain 
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you are so thoughtful,
love the nomination,
a perfect post from a perfect poet.
Cheers.
xxx
hopeful piece,
wishing the conflicts fade away some day….
I really enjoyed reading this one.
well done.
have fun visiting.
Beautifully written, such a delight to read!
All the best
Marinela x
conflicts will fade when understanding met =P It is part of the life cycle i guess… congratz on your award and happy rally^^
Conflict is part of growing up.
It’s just up to us how to solve each one of these hurdles.
Kudos for the award!
HAPPY RALLY!
Oh, here’s my share!
YOU
Thanks!
LOVE,
B
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Coneflict in such great words does not feel like conflict at all.. how conflicting.. thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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great poem. your rhyme use was brilliant. read nicely out loud too… nice flow off the tongue. loved the theme of conflict. great job!
Thank you for visiting. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece out loud too. Spoken word is my first love and I always wonder if the reader can feel it on the page.
Thanks
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here is mine:
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/today-i-write-it-down.html
thats when problems start. not when we are different but when we try to make others like us.
I could hear these words so true it was as though they were my own. I really enjoyed the way you said this it seemed so comfortable to me. Thank you for the ride!
Thanks for your feedback on my rally entry–I’m so happy you were drawn into the piece! After reading your entry, I can see why–your poem reads like it should be spoken. I hope you continue blogging as well as reading!
i really like this..its like you took what i was feeling &thinking about all day today (and many times in the past) and put it into beautiful words.
very well written 🙂
That was really great. i loved the flow of this poem the pain and problems are so real and obvious. Thank you for sharing it with me.
LoLs
Sorry meant to type Lola and it came out LoLs. I am not lauging out loud in plural.
🙂
LoLAAAAAA
Love this! I can hear your voice like u were reading it to me! and clearly I feel the emotion behind the conflict…this makes my mind twirl to all the conflicts we’ve both come across and how much we’ve both grown from the same atrocities. Praise him! and thanks for the nomination I am HONORED!
welcome linking in a poem to our potluck today, Thanks in advance!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-buildings-landmarks-and.html
an award will be given upon participation this week.
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Nice poem. I love the theme of it and the simplicity of the flow.
http://chickunderconstruction.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/autumn-days/
good point, and very good poem 🙂
Always there is conflict and we have to make choices. Opposite force distracting you from your course. You understand human nature and put it into words. Well written. Thank you.
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I love the introduction, simple yet packs a punch!
Yuu really have a gift. Moving, provacative and o so plain goes inside the deepest caverns of my brain.